BerlynRae

HEAR YE! HEAR YE! My name is Berlyn and I love reading and writing Fantasy so I have decided to see what other Fantasy is being written on YWS. I ...

Before you can define what your character us, you have to understand their personality. Ask yourself a question, such as “What do they like to do?” or "who are they ...

Hello world- Here I am- Standing on cold ground- You're changed, since spring days are now gone? who once you were “your” now you are not, my old friend. You ...

"I sat on my bed at home, bored out of my mind. Thinking of things to do, I finally settled on taking a walk through the woods. The forest was ...

one problem "Chillen in Ron Weasley’s #flyingcar … NDB! " whats NDB Stand for?

I'm pretty sure its the "Sorcerers Stone"

"Austin told me that I’d forget about it. He said that it didn’t matter, that running would stop my mind from crashing. I actually believed him. Too bad Austin lied. ...

As always the voice is spot on. I could feel the distress of not wanting to be there and the annoyance of the how he feels compared to someone who ...

I very much enjoyed this piece and the reality of it. How true it is that we bind ourselves to someone without them doing them same in return and if ...

This one is by far my favorite. Why? You may ask. Well first off I now understand that this boy has a dysfunctional family. It adds depth and meaning to ...

Again, I'm having a hard time following your setting. Is it at a church or a school meeting? It seems that none of the chapters really correspond (setting wise). Hence, ...

I don't know exactly what to say to this piece, because it felt like it didn't quite flow. I was understanding it and then not. He hates his life (or ...

Interesting. I especially like the ending. "They think it is obscene. I think it is a work of art." I like how his opinion clashes so much with his "friends" ...

Write bits and pieces then find a way for you to put it all together. Ask your characters questions. What was the saddest time in your life? What was the ...