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  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Don't Be Scarred

    I REALLY liked this. I thought the plot was excellent and I was totally engrossed by the storyline. I thought the character development was excellent as it was completely realistic ...

    Mar 10, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: The Machine

    The idea that you have used is great but using only dialogue I wouldn't have. I would still keep those lines but have parts in-between. For example, when Wilson first ...

    Mar 10, 2014
  • Short Story » Horror, Other Re: My horror leads to unexpected death

    I thought this was a really good idea because most people have special childhood toys that are special so this plays on a great idea for horror. I would have ...

    Mar 10, 2014


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