BenToomey

Wow you were right this is actually really quite sad and tugs on the heartstrings. It's really really good though and you are just great. I like how it seems ...

I absolutely love this my mate. In my eyes it's everything a short story should be you have managed to create a great sense of panic and urgency just through ...

I liked the idea of this story and I want to see more of this hopefully. However I do have some small criticism which may just be my own opinion ...