BenFranks

Thankyou for your review!

Thanks for the reviews.

Thanks for the reviews everyone. I'm taking in your tips for my Novel. :)

Ill review other half tomorrow!

thanks for the review! :)

Thankyou for your review! :D

Fantastic! :)

Thankyou for your review. I'd just like to mention that dialogue is a motor to my story which is why it's used as often as it is, however, I do ...

Also, would a normal person really know the exact sound of a rocket taking off? Maybe use a different metaphor. I don't mean to be picky... but I think you ...

Thankyou, I found your review very helpful :). It's only rated 18+ until I get confirmation of the language! I find your dialogue tips very useful and I'm making changes ...

P.S: The reason for the amount of dialogue is that I use dialogue as a motor to my story, as opposed to narrative. However, not in the sense that I'd ...

“Does dad have brown eyes” I asked to my mother. “I believe so. Why?” “No reason. Let’s finish supper”. Oh and this was a fantastic bit of dialogue (: Consider ...

Feedback would be very helpful ='[

January 4th 2010. ************************************************ Finally, we're back to school and out of the for-saken repetitive holidays that take up the majority of the time between Boxing Day a