BenDietz

I feel that if I found this opening in a book at the library or a book store I wouldn't continue reading this story. That's through no fault of you ...

Show, don't tell! The best tip that almost no one gives. There are some stories that have perfectly good plots but are ruined when all they say is "This happened." ...

First, I wish to give thanks to the OP of this thread. The link gave myself a sobering experience as a writer. I've received scores all the way from grade ...