Ben10

"What would your family think?" I know it's the girl saying this, but you really should state this in the text. Just so it is more clear for the readers. ...

THE END Ah an old fashion ending to a new age tale. How cute! I think this is a really good piece of work and I congratulate you on it. ...

Woah, you may want to shorten this a little so it's not that HUGE . Now you're probably thinking, well this is a writing and reading website... But I did ...

“Alisssson you are soooo cool. I wish was you. Did you know?. . . (long pause) That my, that my floor is white? Cause I’m not sure you knew that, ...

Very good, very good Apple! Ben 10, here to review your work per the gesture of - this site! I believe it is a very good story but the grammar ...

Keep going keep writing please don't stop these are really awesome! And I so badly hate ink man right now I want him dead so yeah keep writing this is ...

Very good, I think you write a lot maybe even to much though I am not saying this badly I was capitvated the whole time through the story. I think ...

I loved it, the book was really good. I want one of those flying disks that would be so awesome! Anyway the only grammical error I found was instead of ...

That's really good. I liked it. A little gruesome but who doesn't like action! I liked it a lot and have nothing bad to say about it :xd: ...Good Job!