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Re: Imaginary Friends - FUTURE: Hole in the Head (Part 2/3)
Okay, I definitely brought out the doc's anger issues, heehee. It was kind of about how he doesn't solve it normally (as Mercy points out) and making him what he ...
Jan 18, 2015 -
Re: Imaginary Friends - FUTURE: Hole in the Head (Part 1/3)
It's coming! Let me finish final edits. You might freak out at the beginning [of the next part of this], but there's a reason for my choices. The whole chapter ...
Jan 13, 2015 -
Re: Imaginary Friends - 13: Sweet About Me
Try this - the future chapter . It's a chapter I'm very interested to see reactions to. Also, the story is kinda leading up to the events shown therein.
Jan 12, 2015 -
Re: Imaginary Friends - 13: Sweet About Me
The chapter I mentioned was the future one. Thanks anyway for the review. Nice to hear from you.
Jan 11, 2015 -
Re: Imaginary Friends - FUTURE: Hole in the Head (Part 1/3)
It feels so good to post something. We all knew this moment (in the plot) was coming. I must draw your attention to the fact that I'm not sure how ...
Jan 11, 2015 -
Re: Imaginary Friends - 10: Tears Dry On Their Own
Thanks.
Dec 23, 2014 -
Re: Imaginary Friends - 10: Tears Dry On Their Own
Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it. It was a really good look into Mercy's mind, wasn't it? I mean that I was as intrigued as you were ...
Dec 16, 2014 -
Re: Imaginary Friends - 13: Sweet About Me
I have plans for Mercy later on. I just haven't reached that point... Really want to get there, but at the same time, I don't want to rush.
Nov 23, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 7.1 Avery
The opposite-ness is great. It's used often in writing... What you've done, I was going for with Layla and Mercy.
Nov 20, 2014 -
Re: Riddle 2
Exactly what I was going to guess...
Nov 18, 2014 -
Re: Imaginary Friends - 13: Sweet About Me
If I could help it... I feel I should post more often too.
Nov 16, 2014 -
Re: Imaginary Friends - 13: Sweet About Me
PS. Mercy has always been able to read Layla's mind. Layla even says so in this chapter. You could also say that Mercy just knows her that well...
Nov 15, 2014 -
Re: Imaginary Friends - 13: Sweet About Me
Have a nose at the changes I've just made, if you want.
Nov 15, 2014 -
Re: Imaginary Friends - 13: Sweet About Me
Thanks for reviewing; you're still faster than me XD Oh my god, the Big Thing you're predicting.... It is on the cards, probably sooner than you or I think. Mercy's ...
Nov 15, 2014 -
Re: Imaginary Friends - 13: Sweet About Me
This was about meeting Scott, mainly. I noticed that he gave the power to Sara when he leaves the decision to her. That seems important. Also, it's the one and ...
Nov 15, 2014
