BellaRoma

I have the same issue. The other writers here have really helped, though. You'll pick things up.

@siyasingh, I hope this advice helps improve the clarity of your writing.

Thank you for this. XD I meant sometimes she hates him more than others. Mercy wasn't there.... I think that was to kinda show that Layla is alone in this. ...

Please do!

Okay. Technology... Wanna chat about it?

Okay... Loving it so much you posted twice? It%u2018s so annoying when that happens.

Aww! Thanks. That means a lot.

I nearly cried writing this.

PS. You hardly revealed anything for ages in Affinity, thinking about how you wanna know Doc's motives.

Thank you for the reviews! I hope you enjoy the future chapters (I used caps so that people definitely knew what they were reading XD)... I think you'll find something ...

Thank you for this. I`m glad you thought so highly of it. Letting you guys know is my first priority when I post XD Part 3 is gonna be awesome ...

I will let you know.

I do know, honest!

Would it make you feel better if I told you that next chapter the doc lets slip what he has against Layla? I promise to also tell you more about ...

Sara is part of a bigger plan... You will find out next chapter. He wants her for a reason. It leads up to my ending. Once part 3 is up, ...