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BejnJonathonEdwards

  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Alice's Adventures in Zombieland

    I think this is very well written. You have a great writing style :) Just write more, I'm interested to read more.

    Sep 7, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Final Goodbye

    Thank you for the pointers :) I was in a weird place when I wrote this, in my defence. My mind was all over the place.

    Sep 5, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Chasing nightmares

    This is brilliant :) Reminds me of my time at school.

    Sep 5, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: I Wanted to Change My Name

    I love this poem :) It's so whimsical and humorous.

    Sep 5, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Letting Go

    I love this :) It spurs my imagination like the beauty found in the Final Fantasy games.

    Sep 5, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Sorry

    I like it :) There's real emotion here.

    Sep 5, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Final Goodbye

    If only I could stop your self hatred from your broken heart, there lies the blame I couldn't make sense of what you said but you made me understand there ...

    Sep 5, 2011


You are strong enough to conquer this day and the rest of your life.
— Atticus