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BejnJonathonEdwards

  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Alice's Adventures in Zombieland

    I think this is very well written. You have a great writing style :) Just write more, I'm interested to read more.

    Sep 7, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Final Goodbye

    Thank you for the pointers :) I was in a weird place when I wrote this, in my defence. My mind was all over the place.

    Sep 5, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Chasing nightmares

    This is brilliant :) Reminds me of my time at school.

    Sep 5, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: I Wanted to Change My Name

    I love this poem :) It's so whimsical and humorous.

    Sep 5, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Letting Go

    I love this :) It spurs my imagination like the beauty found in the Final Fantasy games.

    Sep 5, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Sorry

    I like it :) There's real emotion here.

    Sep 5, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Final Goodbye

    If only I could stop your self hatred from your broken heart, there lies the blame I couldn't make sense of what you said but you made me understand there ...

    Sep 5, 2011


Poetry is my cheap means of transportation. By the end of the poem the reader should be in a different place from where he started. I would like him to be slightly disoriented at the end, like I drove him outside of town at night and dropped him off in a cornfield.
— Billy Collins