BeckeeRenae

That was a really amazing story! (I really like the title:) The story line was a really interesting (although a little cliche) but I especially liked how you brought some ...

You scream my name. Someone was always screaming. Loud, shrill, bonechilling. The kind of scream that made my heart curdle and my lungs turn out cold. The kind of scream ...

This is a really fantastic piece and it really drew me into the world of your characters! I would love to read a continuation of this story. However, I also ...

Expectations. Expectations from parents, teachers, friends, siblings – yourself. Expectations to do the right thing and say the right words and be the world’s savior. Expectations loaded my should

They say you never really know someone until it’s too late. But I know you. You wanted everything unobtainable and were content with nothing less. “What’s the use of trying, ...

This is a really great idea. It's nothing I've heard before and it grabbed my attention immediately. While the topic was extremely incredible, I also felt this chapter lacked a ...

I wasn't sure how I was going to like it when I first started it, because it's not at all what I'm used to reading, but it was absolutely marvelous! ...

That was great! You had a couple spelling errors, punctuation problems, and grammar issues such as using "you're" instead of "your", but other than that, you have an absolutely stellar ...

This was so fabulous! I really liked it! You are extremely talented, and I feel like this would make an absolutely beautiful song. Your piece really made me, as the ...

I’ve been listening to the songs on the disc you gave me in August. The one I ran over with my car. The one that made you leave and never ...