Young Writers Society

Berries, Red, purple, Full of colour, Happy, bright, ripe feeling. Fruit. ------------------------------------- Please tell me what you think and i will take all of yoru tips and comments into my ...

Frost, Crunching, crackling, Crisp under foot, Cold, miserable, grey feeling. Icy rain. -------------------------------------------- This ismy second Cinquain on Frost. I hope you all like it and plea

Autumn, Runny noses, Runny, wet, dribbling, Dripping down your face. First frost. --------------------------------- Cinquains are only suposed to be 5 lines long and i think i'm going to make them ...

Thank you all for your generousity on this poem. I think i wrote it a while back at school or something but i found and decided to but it on. ...

Hellos are hard, You don't know what to say, You would look at me, But I'd look the other way. I blushed every time I saw you, You talked to ...

Love me in the Springtime, when all is green and new, Love me in the Summer, when the sky is oh so blue, Love me in the Autumn, when the ...

I really did enjoy this. I think (like that person above said) that there were some good rymings ect and i think taht you coudl go quite well if you ...

They Are REALLY GOOD!!! You must have and AMAZING Camera. Which One? I have one which is good. Optio S7. I LOVE IT. Lol. Keep going and i think you ...

I THINK THESE ARE AMAZING!!! You deffinatly have Pretendual of being a artist or something. Keep going and i think you could be VERY GOOD at it. Well done. X

I really like it. It is very GOOD. Keep going and i think that you will do very well. Well done. X

I think you could be a very talented painter. That was so well sdetailed ect. I think that was amazing. I really do think that. I love it. Try some ...

I can't really remeber when i started reading a book. But i think it was around the age of Three. That is also the most votes. :)

That was VERY GOOD in my opinion. I thoroughly enjoyed that. But i think you should keep going and write more and more and soon you will become Better and ...

I've never read anything written by you.. But this is a VERY GOOD start to me reading of your writing. I thoroughly enjoyed this. I loved all of the passion. ...

I really like this poem. I've never heard/read anything like this before. And that is GOOD. It was a little scarey, but that keeps that reader [like me] griped. That ...