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Re: Life After Death Prelude and Chapter 1
I like it; it sounds very interesting. The plot, I mean. Anyway, one thing that you should do to make the writing easier to read is to leave a space ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Reaper
Chapter one A N ight of R epentance Okay, make you sure leave two spaces between titles, and one space between paragraphs. (At least one space between paragraphs on here, ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Hunted ch. 2
One shoplifting and a raid of some person's freezer later, we 're were dressed in dry ed clothes and eating ice cream out of the carton in a park. Charlie ...
Jun 21, 2011 -
Re: Want reviews?
If you need someone to review anything of yours, you've come to the right place! :) Well, not anything, I'll only review these: - Novels, but only a chapter. - ...
Jun 21, 2011 -
Re: Sparrow and Spaghetti: Chapter 1 part 1
It really could be worse, I suppose. I could be on the stage. I could have a number branded on my face and shackles around my ankles; but I don’t, ...
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: Hai there o.O
Hey! I'm Julie and I'm new here to the YWS. I've taken a look around and I think that I'm going to like this place. :) I've been writing for ...
Jun 19, 2011