BeachRose21

Thanks alot guys. This is exactly what I needed. I think I may completely cut out this chapter and spread its descriptions through out the rest.

I truly enjoyed this poem. It just sucked me in and I could see all the scenes. Your imagery is magnifique. Keep up the great work. =)

So I see what you mean about a scene that really sucks you into the story and how mine is lacking one. I like how it really does grip your ...

I really like this. The images are great! I love the message about how the moonlight reveals the beauty.

LauRux thank you for your review this is the first of my stories I have ever really written besides the regular stuff for school. English is my week subject so ...

Wow this is really nice. I'm so happy that there was a happy ending. You did really well with this poem I ended hoping with the narrator that it would ...

I’m no special girl, I’m shy and many people in my grade don’t know what to think of me. Sigh some would say I am pretty with my long wavy ...