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Re: Cameron
I feel like you did well in writing this but often times tipped your hand in unnecessary ways. The taxi driver was a good way to bring the story to ...
May 11, 2014 -
Re: The Owl Man and His Son
This was a good one. I enjoyed every bit of it and found it captivating. From the rural tones to the distaste to change and speaks messages towards the way ...
May 11, 2014 -
Re: Life Is Delicate
It was a fairly good story. I liked the whole 'Your days are numbered' theme you brought to this feel good story. You managed to cover from cradle to the ...
May 11, 2014 -
Re: Silence.
I found this to be a tad incoherent. It had a unique style but most of it was just descriptive symbolism that didn't give much for a reader to follow. ...
May 10, 2014 -
Re: An Average Man
It wasn't bad, you showed your skills as a writer. The plot as stated before, is full of plenty of holes. There wasn't enough to make even the reader believe ...
May 9, 2014
