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Re: Storm
yeah, the structure was supposed to create a "stream of thoughts" if you know what i mean. disjointed and a bit jolty? Also i tried using simple words to make ...
Nov 15, 2007 -
Re: Whisperings over Africa's plains (1)
Africa seems so far away when you locate it on a map. And an eight and a half hour plane journey really isn't that bad. But the experience you get ...
Nov 14, 2007 -
Re: Hi people!
Hi my name is Baylee, I am eighteen (but no way near adult status) love writing poetry and stories, love constructive criticism, I'm a bit brutal, but not horrible! Lol, ...
Nov 14, 2007 -
Re: a poem for her
I'm not sure why, but this poem didn't seem to be what i thought it was going to be. In fact it was quite hollow in the way it lacked ...
Nov 14, 2007 -
Re: Storm
lightning flashes thunder rolls I curl my little finger into the crook of yours Like a little girl scared of monsters Lurking under my bed. Never could walk through the ...
Nov 13, 2007
