Bastion

Thanks for the help! I'll go back over it now. ;P

Thanks, appreciate the feedback!

Thanks. Appreciate the feedback.~

Definitely! And just as I'd greatly appreciate it if you'd check out my work! I'm actually interested in what other people think about what I write, because everyone perceives things ...

Yeah, I know how you feel on that one. I try to make my writing sound as if it's coming from an older person so people won't stop reading it ...

Thanks for the tips and examples! I'll get right on it.~

Thanks! I'll definitely mess around with it today and I'll PM you when I've edited it. Thanks again for the review!

Yeah. At first I was unsure about whether or not to actually put the first paragraph, but after some though and planning ahead plot wise, I think/hope it'll work out ...

Yeah, that's why I wasn't sure about recognize or recognise. No one really says anything about it being spelled differently in other places, you kinda just find out after sounding ...

That was absolutely brilliant. "That's what you get, if you take LSD!" I died at this part. I'm not good at reviewing poems/lyrics so I'll just leave this fancy comment ...