Basil

Ok, I'll consider what you've said. Thank you

Will do!!

Thanks for that!! And Yeah, I'll edit those bits! Oops!! Forgot to change the title to chap 1 then!! See I'd originally had the WHOLE story up, but a very ...

Thanks!! I'll consider it all and, as I've said before, I will then edit it ;)

Thanks! I'll see what I can do. I usually wait for a bit and then edit my works, but seeing as this is the second story I've finished, that may ...

You're welcome!

Yes you are!! ^^

Wow!! You did a good job at writing this!! I love it! Keep it up!

Your welcome!! And any time ;)

Wow, Jcsmooth!! That was beautiful! You have written that well! And if I'm correct, it's dedicated to someone? Well, they are the luckiest person in the world to have you! ...

Thank you!! And I'm very glad you enjoyed it and found it funny!!! It was actually quite hard to incorporate all the Gods and Goddesses, so I'm glad you think ...

No, no offence taken at all!! And thank you for that! It's the first short story I've ever actually finished! ^^ So yeah, I'm proud of that!

Alright. Thanks for that ;)

@D4RKR4VEN I am so sorry I have no idea why my spelling is so bad. I think I didn't get enough sleep last night ... or maybe because it's so ...

Yes ... I'm a she And I certainly did change it after reading @D4RKR4AVEN 's post. I WAS going to say that the reason it is so long it because ...