Basil

Oh yay!! You made it to the literary spotlight!! Very deserving! And it's very good :D

Haha thanks!! Glad you like it X3

Thanks!!

I love it! It's amazing!

No problem!! And not too long either!!

This is amazing!! I love it!!

Oh I love it!! I'm glad you put the link on the work. It is brilliant!

It wasn't harsh at all!! And ok! ^^

Well then ... um ... thank you, first off! As for chapter twelve coming ... I still need to decide upon the ending! I'm going to ask: What would be ...

I'll ... just um ... fix that ... And yeah! I'm still trying to work out how to end it, though. I don't know whether to make Daniel the Welcomer, ...

Thanks! The nitpicks are dreadfully painful! *Dramatic faint* But I shall power through them as I power through everything else! Well, technically Cleo can't say she's the GATEKEEPER, but she ...

Thank you!! And, actually, yes, Ancient Egyptian Cleopatra (Who wasn't the 1st Cleopatra, actually, but the fifth) did have a daughter, but she was the last Pharaoh of Egypt, and ...

Hey lost! Yeah, my chapters are getting shorter. I'm going by each point where I break them up in the story (I've already finished it, I'm just editing the end) ...

And don't worry, I'll edit everything and add in the details!! I've realised most of my characters procrastinate a lot ...

^^ Yeah ... Cleo's a clean freak! I will edit and I hope everything makes sense!