BarrettBenedict
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Hot shit, man. The ending is perfect. It's short and brutal, memories manifest themselves so there's no need for exposition, it's the perfect little package. Needs some editing though, nothing ...
Jun 19, 2011
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Better than I can do with poetry. I like the line about the sad new moon, it seems to me that the author is identifying with the solitariness of the ...
Apr 11, 2010
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It's a nice little snapshot. The activating incident comes on a little too late for the abrupt ending, though. It seems to be about 3/5 setting it up, and then ...
Feb 26, 2010
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This was well written and I can't wait to read the rest of it. There's always room for awesome fantasy ideas to tie into music, it's such a subconscious thing, ...
Dec 25, 2009
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Hey, awesome, I'm glad I found this. That's a tough choice to make, climbing that ladder, even if words have led you no where. Just make sure that the ladder ...
Dec 22, 2009
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Yeah, I identified very much with this. I've actually been there, at the point where there is no question when you've lost someone. One moment they are your friend and ...
Dec 10, 2009
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Ah, what a great poem. I'm such a literal person that poetry does little else for me but leave impressions, so I'm not going to review this the "right" way, ...
Dec 7, 2009
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This was just terrible. I was expecting to read the words of a conceited man, and instead come to fine that I've been had by an introspective satirist. Not funny. ...
Sep 17, 2009
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Wow this was quite excellent. There are always other strings Who offer up their red and white and blue and yellow and green Mantras to the wind In that order ...
Sep 17, 2009
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Hey this works pretty well for a short piece. It probably wouldn't have worked with a different POV, so good choice there. Some damn fine descriptions in this: His heart ...
Sep 17, 2009
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The butterflies died and lay in the snow. Yay. But I felt like something new. That feeling of abandon that I love to give to you. I know I'm lousy ...
Sep 17, 2009
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The mirror reflects more mirrors. You put them together wrong and show enough people and they will say "Hey, yeah, I can swing that." I don't get the relationship of ...
Sep 17, 2009
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It'll do. I think everyone else caught the spelling mistakes and so forth. The teenage years are full of confusion and brooding. I wrote many such like this. Who cares ...
Sep 17, 2009
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Johnny Got His Gun by Dalton Trumbo. It's an oldy but a goody, dark political story about a Soldier that gets all of his extremities blown off and is stuck ...
Sep 17, 2009
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I was delighted as poop to find this. This is just a naturally great horror story. I enjoyed it so much I forgot to think of things to say during ...
Sep 16, 2009
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