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Re: I need your help in criticizing my plot
-snip- Probably it would be, fighting your own ideals or accept your new ideology. Also, I created my chapter 1, My story starts from the pre future to past of ...
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Re: I need your help in criticizing my plot
-snip- Sorry for late reply and don't squish me! >.< So, yeah! You got it all right! I think I should add more mystery but everything will be a slow ...
Jun 9, 2018 -
Re: I need your help in criticizing my plot
The real heart of the story is finding the Chip of SIGMA's History because it is the key to the human cure.
Jun 8, 2018 -
Re: I need your help in criticizing my plot
Oh my God! You guessed it correctly! One of the mysteries in my story is the real identity of Michael and Erzen if they are either a SEED or SIGMA. ...
Jun 8, 2018 -
Re: Portraying the events at the same time
Just like what the title says, how can I portray that the series of events are happening at the same time? Because most of my scenes are like that but ...
Jun 8, 2018 -
Re: Little Details (Post a question without starting a thread!)
Why it feels like I love to write dialogues. Every time I try to detail what's in my head it is kind of different. Most of the time, all of ...
Jun 8, 2018 -
Re: Sign Language in Fiction
One of my Main Character is mute but not entirely mute; she can speak but it hurts her vocal cords and she can barely show any emotion. Instead, she draws ...
Jun 7, 2018 -
Re: I need your help in criticizing my plot
Just like what the title says, I need your comments ^^ This is the first book I'm working with. Its name is "A shifter's fate" a book filled with Drama, ...
Jun 7, 2018
