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Thanks for sharing the tip MaddieMouse, giving my characters names has always been a toughie but I will try your method out. :) Keep up the excellent story-telling. ^_^

I am bad at names but So takes the cake. Thank you for your honest review Wandering Wizard. Let's see where this goes. :)

Thank you Maddie for yet another review. The length is fine. :) Yeah, there is more to Gin. I definitely need to change So's name. lol. She cleaned the toilets ...

Pretzelsing, I was totally wondering how other reviewers do it but never asked. Thanks a lot. :)

Thank you once more Maddie for this review, just saw it. True, I am a little hesitant to put extra details because I fear I might make grammar errors or ...

Thank you for your review The WanderingWizard. You are right, I could definitely phrase my sentences better, getting there. Your review was helpful and I will add them to my ...

Thanks Maddie for your review. Yay, you are excited about it as I am which makes me feel like am finally getting my writing together. I'll keep working on it. ...

Thank you WeasleyDragon for the review. I will try to be consistent and flow but that will come with practice I guess. Thanks. :)

Hi Steampowered, thank you so much for your review. Yes, you are right, I need to pay more attention to the grammar. I am glad you like the characters and ...

Thank you MaddieMouse for your review. I appreciate it. Good God, I do not know how the space bar thing happened. I imported the text so maybe that's why. Grrr. ...

Happy review day Niraco. Thank you for the detailed review and I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Children's stories are not my usual genre but this was something I was ...

Thanks for the review Heir. That first sentence in my reply was an error. Well. :)

Thank you Heir for the review, though you left it as a comment. Oops. Well the nature of this prologue is that we do not really know the relationship between ...

Thank you Purnima for the review. :) Yes, you are right. I need to clean some punctuation. Glad you like the story. I normally don't write fables but gave this ...

Thank you Firelight for your review ^_^. The next one is coming up soon so let's see where it goes. I edited the 'a dead' part since it was confusing ...