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Name: Cassius Grof Age: 15 Gender: Male District: 4 Appearance: Shorter than average,big green eyes,shaggy/greasy dirty blond hair that hangs over his thin face. Muscled arms and legs hidden under ...

Do you have a space open? 9th dead.

I found one thing. Flame mounted his horse, F eather. This should be capitalized because it's the horse's name. The whole thing was good, and I didn't find any other ...

Thanks TigerShaard, There's more :D , it's just not as organized as this. It's forming quite slowly, but I'm working on it. :smt001 -Bandgeek

Rayen Rayen’s eyes opened in the middle of a dead sleep. Where am I? her waking mind thought. While trying to remember, her gray eyes wandered over to the only ...

The squeak of a clarinet splits through the air, flutes wake under the hands of their players. Drumsticks begin to dance on a drumhead, a rat a tat tat. Trombones ...

Rayen: Tell them I liked them and get over it. David: Start avoiding them so there's no awkward talk between us. James: Talk about my feelings with her so she ...

Thanks for the comments. I'm combing through myself and wow... there's a lot of errors.

Rayen: Ask Silas to turn into a lighting bug. David: Pretend my eyes are closed and I can't open them. Michael: Find a fwashwight. *baby giggle* Rayen: He means flashlight. ...

Thanks, Rain isn't in the story so thanks for catching that.

Thanks everyone! I know have a edited version of this. So please comment on that not this. Thanks Bandgeek

Thanks you two! I now have a new version so please comment on that, not this anymore. Thanks!

Dear Reader, Where you are, wherever you are, wherever you are not, you are always one step away from the world which this book will introduce you to. Just keep ...

Rayen’s eyes opened in the middle of a dead sleep. Where am I? her waking mind thought. While trying to remember, her gray eyes wandered over to the only light ...

That was great in a scary way. How did the body switch happen? I didn't see any errors or mistakes. Your main character was really creepy, almost to creepy. Was ...