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Re: The 12 Days of Christmas- Prologue
Your style of writing is really good and captivating, however there are places where you could polish your technique. I actually don't have time to critique your story more thoroughly ...
Oct 13, 2005
Your style of writing is really good and captivating, however there are places where you could polish your technique. I actually don't have time to critique your story more thoroughly ...
Oct 13, 2005