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Re: Long Sleeves
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May 1, 2015
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Re: My Poem
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May 1, 2015
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Re: MARY - MAY OFFEND (Over 13 for language)
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May 1, 2015
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Re: She wrapped time around her neck like a rope
"knowledge running like the crystalline Jamaican waterfalls" Not sure what this means could you explain this? I really like this! It is absolutely amazing.A lot of emotion in this. It ...
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Re: Curiosity Killed The Cat
""No! Stop! Don't touch that!" my mother exclaimed." just an option here, but i think you should put more emotion behind on how the mother talks. what i mean is ...
Apr 16, 2015