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Re: Years Fall Like Foes
I love the fact that you are inciting the fact that life is a great gift, and you should use it wisely. I believe that you could make each line ...
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Re: Schizophrenic
Hey! I really like it! I believe that Schizophrenic would be a good title, or maybe "Broken Illusions." Also, I believe "by" would make more sense there. Other than that, ...
Nov 6, 2014