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Hello brokestarvingwriter, This poem has humor and is interesting. I could not spot any mistakes in grammar, and the rhyming was mostly consistent throughout the poem. However, I do not ...

I usually don't listen to any music while writing, but when I do listen (to get an idea etc.), I listen to the following: 1. Pink Floyd: Mostly "Another Brick ...

Hello BumbleBear, I will review your work today. First of all, the rhyme scheme and the rhythm was greatly well made giving the poem a splendid flow to it. The ...

Hello, thank you for commenting. Now for my opinion on humans interfering in nature. (I couldn't comment any sooner because of school and homework. By my opinion, our interference in ...

Hello, everyone. Here is another one of my riddle poems. Please review and, of course, answer the riddle. Thank you in advance, for school might take my time again. This ...

Hello everyone, Thank you for reviewing my poem and giving such great tips. As for the rhyme scheme and rhythm, they were off, for ,during writing this poem, I had ...

Hello Everyone, This is another of my poems: King Midas It's close to the real legend, but I think that I might have changed it a little. Anyhow, please enjoy ...

Hi Ben Franks, Thank you for reviewing my article and giving tips. I will edit it as soon as I can. :D

Hello everyone, This article is about the Persian/Iranian cheetah species. I have provided the article in an attachment here in .doc format. If that format does not work for you, ...

Hello, Apple. Thank you for commenting on my essay! :D

Hello, everyone. The Nightmare “Night, Mom. Night, Dad,” I said rather loudly at about 1:30 am as I was walking towards my bedroom. Climbing my bed I wished that hopefully ...

Hello, Firestarter and Ben Franks; Thank you for commenting on and reviewing my poem. I'll try to edit my poem with your suggestions. Again, Thank you! :D

Hello, Made_In_Demise; Thank you for commenting on my poem! :D

Hello, everyone. This is "The News" The News The news is on; I must see; Anything new, I must know; Any new criminals saying a plea, I change the channels ...

Hi, Jasmine, I really enjoyed your prologue! It got me interested in what was happening. I can't wait to hear( or read) more! :D