BagelMarie

Thanks for reading! I know these first couple chapters are short and slow, this is just a quick look into Jeremy's life and why he's setting out on this journey. ...

Thank you very much for the review! It doesn't have a title because I haven't thought of one I like yet, hehe. ^^; Plus I still have to decide if ...

Thank you for reading! I'm glad I conveyed the Tolkien style well (not that I'm trying to "steal" it haha, but it's a good template for fantasy and adventure). I ...

Ahh I see, well I'm still excited to keep reading! ^^

Thank you for reading! I know this chapter is super description-heavy, which makes it a little slow. The next couple of chapters have a little bit of dialogue, but it ...

Hello! Thanks for taking the time to read - I'm glad you liked it! I may take you up on your offer for title help; I have a few ideas ...

Thank you for the wonderful review! Unnecessary repetition and overuse of commas are both things that I actually worry about, so thank you for pointing those out! And I love ...

Update: Edited to include a sneak preview of some of the other races and a little more description about Merrihill :)

Thanks for taking the time to read! I definitely want to look into your fantasy series, just the title is enough to intrigue me! This is just chapter 1 of ...