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Re: Inheritance
I said, Zack was her boyfriend for about 7 months, and for 7 months Carol’s been trying to convince me that I wanted a boyfriend. When you use a number ...
Jun 15, 2010 -
Re: Shifters: Chapter 9
“They only appear when you’re a Shifter, not when you’re human. How else would people hide them or else ?” she said, laughing softly , “Plus, you don’t always have ...
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: Hi
I'm not really sure what kind of fantasy mine is, exactly.
Apr 1, 2010 -
Re: Hi
Thank you for the welcome. I like writing fantasy, but I do have a few ideas for some short romance stories and a few other short things. I'm going to ...
Mar 30, 2010 -
Re: September Ch. 1
I liked this, especially your descriptions. Here are some things I noticed. It was almost impossible to walk with my legs without falling every fifteen minutes. I think this would ...
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: Hi
Hello, I'm Babbling Brooke. I've actually been on here for about a week or so, but, as you can see, am just now introducing myself. I have recently started writing ...
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: Prologue: Diamond Fire (Revived)
Other than the changing tenses, the only thing that really bugged me was that, when you use the word 'Mom' it needs to be capitilized, unless it has 'my' in ...
Mar 28, 2010
