BTubz

Thanks for the feedback, I see what you're saying. The whole dusting narrative is meant to give insight on how it's often difficult for people to truly care about others ...

That was great feedback, thank you. Glad you liked it.

Thanks. Also, you just interpreted "silhouette" a way I was not entirely planning it to be, but now that you mention it, that's great. "Silhouette" in that context I wrote ...

I'm glad it caused your mouth to be... open :) And yeah, I've been toying around with that sentence for awhile now... while "my pace I then double" makes sense ...

You're right, old age isn't all bad - I took a very biased standpoint for the sake of irony at the end. He goes on and on about just how ...

Thanks for catching that, you're 100% correct. Glad you enjoyed it.