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I have to agree with Gwenevire about switching up the way you use words describing an event. However, the story line was good. Also, I kinda got confused with the ...

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Love of my life, my soulmate You're part of me like breathing You're like a song I love to sing Never thought your beat would match my rhythm Couldn't imagine ...

I have to agree with smorgishborg. The poem was very confusing. It wasn't focused at all. However, the sound was nice. Also, I didn't understand the meaning of the poem.

This is a great piece of work. I was drawn in from the very beginning. The only problem I had was how did she know that she was having a ...