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Ok! Here we are again! ^^ By the way, thanks for following me here ;) I'd love to know what you think of the 1st chapter of my novel :) ...

Ok, I'm super, super tired and my muscles are all completely sore so forgive me if I don't make much sense... Another nice chap ;) Cade does seem a little ...

Nice chap :) We're finally seeing a little more of Cade and I think he might like Lani, which would make this story even more interesting ;) It's not perfect ...

Lovely chapter :) Indeed, a bit more emotion and description of the immediate surroundings would make total difference. It was a little short, but still good, finally Lani noticed Lavender ...

Well, I'll start by saying that this seems so much like my classes xD Teacher leaves... Immediate noise :P Good old times... *Sighs* Ok, now, I've read some of the ...