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it's ok any way old made ropes are are very thik and strong but look like they have been worn down to fool the eye and in royal deth setenceing ...

cool man that was really good don't make any changes casue i found no flaws this should have like a nother chapter or somthign i liked it. KEEP GOING

the was wickedly deep man ROCK ON it was so cool i love how u decribed ur hart jumping into him and the other grl thing so kool

hey cool idk wat for u to fix u use suck rich text and good flewence ur so better than me

lol LOVS IT :)

Shunned by everything in the light They stare at you in spite You run away from the people who just see a face Covered in descries Not your kind soul, ...

I will say this one more time. It is supposed to be small because it’s a sample. I need to know what sounds good. I will make it longer when ...

Thats awsome Swearing and excessive smileys and caps lock are big no-no's. Love, Poetry Crew.

I roam the shadows of this forsaken and unsympathetic town as there people walk the streets unaware of my races presence among there modern community. These humans , with there ...

I would say i see mistakes but i cant find any Hey! Spamming is just a bad experience for everyone involved...the caps lock and smileys and random babbling have been ...

well i'll let a pro do this one of my friends who is a wiz at this with out changing any of the main writing. god u guys are so ...

it's supose to be like that so ppl know how it was edited that y there are () in them thanks for the advice but it is staying the wa ...

I don’t know how all this happens, but it does, and it happens to me. It seems that I always get the fallen angel on my shoulder that’s screwing up ...

I don’t know how all this happens, but it does, and it happens to me. It seems that I always get the fallen angel on my shoulder that’s screwing up ...

i find no flaws