Azzman88

Music, My one true escape. Freedom in every note, It is a liberating feeling, One I cannot live without. All it takes is the droning sound of a guitar And ...

Hey Classy, I want to start off by saying that I really loved this poem. A very good effort for a poem off the top of your head! :) One ...

Hey, I really like this poem!! I wrote a poem dedicated to music just the other night. Its fairly different though but i understand how music can make one feel. ...

Hey Guys, This is a poem that I wrote a little while ago. It is an interpretation of one of my favourite songs. To understand the poem I will include ...

Some writing ability you have there!! WOW!!! I am amazed how someone can write like this, tie everything together and finish with a huge bang!!! For example, i really like ...

Hey Kyousuke, Now I would like to start off in saying I like the first version of your poem better than the edited version. The reason being that I think ...

Hey, Let me just start off by saying that this was an absolutely beautiful piece! I can not even begin to imagine how the character feels after something like that ...

Hey geebee, Like the majority, repeating the word smile really got boring. Using another word would really improve this poem. Also, you used the phrase "i cant help but" 3 ...

I found myself reading this over and over again. This is one piece of exceptional writing for a first attempt. I dont normally comment but I really did like this. ...

Hey thanks everyone, It is all great feedback. Its funny to realise how much shit can go into a poem without even noticing. HAHA i have a tendency to just ...

Ok, I know this is fairly long and im not sure if this is the right place to put it but bare with me please :) Let me know what ...

This was pretty good. However, I dont like the spacing you have you have used, but it could just be my computer, i dont know. I think there are spaces ...

I think this is a really good song. It flows really well and i can feel the emotions oozing through every word. However I must be a little picky. the ...

This is one that i wrote one night, obsessing about a girl, realising it wasnt worth it Hope you like: The border must not be crossed It must stay real ...

About a year ago i would have related to this poem closely. I wrote something similar, but completely, pathetically longer. i shall post it soon. i would love for you ...