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Re: Barbie Girl...
I guess when I write, I never try to make to rhymth perfect so I can see where you think it needs work. Plus this is my first draft. In ...
Mar 7, 2006 -
Re: The B Train
I loved your story! It was very fluid, and the details made it very easy to picture. Not too long or favorite part had to be about the "not good ...
Mar 7, 2006 -
Re: Second Chances
~*~ Second Chances ~*~ Lacking the will to maintain the pain Of loneliness, amorphous memories remain Of never tasting the decadence the elixir of love contains So I'll chance you ...
Mar 6, 2006 -
Re: Can I change Ur Mind?
Ok, first off, I liked the poem. Everything doesn't have to be complex to be liked, so for me, it was good. As far as the run of the mill ...
Mar 5, 2006 -
Re: Barbie Girl...
I guess I came up with this one after meeting those seemingly flawless women who tear down everyone else because that image is all they've got..... ~*~ Barbie Girl ~*~ ...
Mar 5, 2006 -
Re: Thirteen...
This is about the simplest poem in my whole book, but hey! I like it... ~*~ 13 ~*~ Today I wanna feel 13 again After the questions but before the ...
Mar 5, 2006 -
Re: Keep the story going.....
"Kaye! Are you alright?" Jordan asked, water dripping from his jet black hair onto Kaye's cheek. "Um....yeah" Kaye mumbled, her vision clearing. It was like time studdered as she rolled ...
Mar 4, 2006 -
Re: Interested Yet? Ivy Woods Ch. 2
I've already written about 13 chapters to this story. Depending on the reviews I get, I'll keep posting chapters and see what happens....
Mar 4, 2006 -
Re: Interested Yet? Ivy Woods Ch. 2
Ok, I've never been ookin on a story after the first chapter, so I mine as well give you part 2.... ~*~ Ivy Woods -Chapter 2 ~*~ The days seemed ...
Mar 4, 2006 -
Re: You're Gonna Get Hooked on This....
Ok, I'm e new member and have started a novel that takes place in a hood called Ivy Woods and if you've ever read a Zane book, then you'll get ...
Mar 4, 2006
