Azila

Ahoy there! Like Aeropostale said, you have a few spelling errors in this piece. You've also got some punctuation issues going on. You might think these both are small, and ...

'Allo, muesli! Joan curled her toes crudely against the cracked floorboards. This is completely up to you, of course, but it seems like an odd use of the word "crudely" ...

Tiger! I really, really liked this. Like. A lot. Anyway, I can gush later. I'm not going to do a ton of nit-picks, since there really isn't much to nit-pick ...

'Allo! I see you're new, so firstly I'd like to just say a quick welcome. If you need any help getting around the site or anything let me know. ^_^ ...

I know this is a) an old piece, b) already submitted, and c) already has reviews, so there's really nothing for me to say. But - I read this and ...

Hullo Gadi! I'm not going to dwell on the line-by-line stuff, but there are a few things I'd like to bring to your attention: She tried on the black coat, ...

Hullo, Pinky! I probably shouldn't be reviewing this, seeing as we're competitors, but... oh well. I'm doing it anyway. I spent countless hours morning his death. "Morning" is the part ...

'Allo, sir! I'm not going to do any nit-picks because (I think) all of the typos uber-cool Welsh moments in this have already been pointed out and there aren't really ...

Hi! I don't think this review is going to be as thorough as my review for Life because this piece feels a lot less polished. The first thing I noticed ...

'Alo! I'm going to start with a few nit-picky things, then get on to the overall bits after. Beside you the fire crackled and danced as your small daughter opened ...

Hello! Thanks to you for requesting a review, and thanks to Tanya for recommending you do so! I'm flattered. ^.^ Anyhow, I'm going to start with nit-picks because there were ...

Ahoy, Rachael! I'm sorry that I got to this too late for the contest... but I thought I'd review it anyway. ^.^ I really liked this! I loved the perspective. ...

Hullo! I'm not going to go through and do line-by-line nitpicky stuff because for one thing, I'm not in the mood to do that and for another thing, I don't ...

Hullo. As has already been said, this is really short... so I'm not sure how much help my review will be, but I'll try my best. ^.^ My main question ...

Hello! Here I am to review, as requested. ^.^ Okay. The first thing I have to say is that you really need to work on your grammar. I think you ...