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Re: Broken But Not Crushed ~Chapter 7
Hi! Sorry I haven't reviewed this in so long--I had to take a week pretty much completely off from YWS because of schoolwork. Anyhow, I'm back now! ^_^ Okay. I'm ...
Feb 25, 2011 -
Re: Broken But Not Crushed ~Chapter 6
Hi! Wow. This piece really is getting better and better. I know I've said that before, but it's true. Your style is perfectly suited to describing the disgusting, hellish camp, ...
Feb 16, 2011 -
Re: Broken But Not Crushed ~Chapter 5
Hi, day! I'm back. I hope you're feeling better. I really think this novel is getting better and better as you portray more and more detail and immediacy. I can ...
Feb 16, 2011 -
Re: Dusk: Prologue
Hi! Thanks for the request. ^_^ “How do I always get pulled into these situations?” I could help but think “I try to do something good for once and it ...
Feb 15, 2011 -
Re: Corruption - Chapter 1
Hi Scarlette! Thanks for the request. Is your username named after the Scarlette in this story? Or is it the other way around? Just curious. ^_^ Anyway. I'm not going ...
Feb 15, 2011 -
Re: To The Shore
Hiya, Pinky! I’m watching our beach as the grey clouds melt over the sulky sky and block out the petty sun. This is really nit-picky, but this whole adjective, noun, ...
Feb 15, 2011 -
Re: Deleted
Hi there! Thanks so much for requesting a review. ^_^ I'm sorry it took me a while to get to it, but now that I'm here, I shall try my ...
Feb 15, 2011 -
Re: After Life
Hullo! Thanks so much for requesting a review of this. I'm sorry I took so long getting back to you--things have been rather busy for me. I am really intrigued ...
Feb 14, 2011 -
Re: Broken But Not Crushed ~Chapter 4
Hello, day. First off, I'd like to say that I think this is probably my favorite chapter yet. It feels like everything up until now has been a sort of ...
Feb 14, 2011 -
Re: Old
I'm here! Finally! I know you've been holding your breath waiting for me. ^_~ I haven't really been doing nit-picks lately just because I have practically no time (the time ...
Feb 13, 2011 -
Re: Broken But Not Crushed ~Chapter 3
Hullo! I'm back. Again, I'm sorry I took so long to get to this chapter, but hopefully you'll find it in yourself to forgive me. ^_~ I'm not going to ...
Feb 12, 2011 -
Re: The Arkford Sleepidemic!
I have humbly come before you, Majesty, to offer my meager opinion of your royal work. Firstly, I'll say that I like this. It is refreshing and witty. The tone ...
Feb 10, 2011 -
Re: Sincerely, Smiley Face [Chapter 1]
Hi! Thanks for the request. Sorry it took me a few days... but better late than never, and all's well that ends well, and it's the thought that counts... but ...
Feb 9, 2011 -
Re: The Strangest Strange Stranger - by JASH
Hello! I'm not sure how helpful this review will be, since you've already gotten so many awesome opinions and practically everything I would have said has already been said. I ...
Feb 8, 2011 -
Re: Broken But Not Crushed ~Chapter 2
Hi, Groucho (mind if I call you that?)! I'm back. I again apologize for all that time that passed between reviews, but things are busy and I got a lot ...
Feb 7, 2011
