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Re: A Matter of Age (A.K.A. Skinsy's Confused)
Hey Skins, When I first saw this post the first thing I thought of was the novel A Tree Grows in Brooklyn . Have you read it? It's been a ...
Feb 14, 2012 -
Re: First and second person and novel Q's!
Hey there! These are great questions--let's see if I can help answer them. #1) Can a story be written in second person, and if so how commonly is it done? ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: changing from one sentence to another
Hi! That sounds somewhat childish, but not overwhelmingly childish. ^.^ If you're going to rely only on the change in narrative style to distinguish the two sections, the change needs ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: changing from one sentence to another
Hullo! Yes, I think it works fine having it in italics. Though if you don't like that, you could always put some sort of devision in between the paragraphs, like ...
Nov 20, 2010 -
Re: Blindness
Thanks, Gyr! I actually was thinking of doing this partially as an exercise in writing using only non-visual senses. I still might do it, actually -- and I think he/she ...
Jul 18, 2008 -
Re: Blindness
Thanks for all the advise, people! Like I dais, I'm not even sure I'll end up writing this -- but it's nice to learn what y'all know. gamechanger10 >> I ...
Jul 13, 2008 -
Re: Blindness
Hi all! I'm thinking of having a (main) character who's blind. So I just wanted to learn all you guys happen to know about blindness: what can cause it, especially. ...
May 23, 2008 -
Re: Interesting 'Quirks' ;) (Such as Synesthesia)
In spatial-sequence, or number form synesthesia, numbers, months of the year, and/or days of the week elicit precise locations in space (for example, 1980 may be "farther away" than 1990), ...
Apr 8, 2008 -
Re: Ratty Opinions
Firstly, there are the people like you (and me!) who love rats. But I know a lot of people who associate the word "rat" with plague, disease and filth. Also, ...
Apr 5, 2008 -
Re: I Just Finished My First Rough Draft EVER!
Does the hate of Eragon have to come up in EVERY topic around here? Anyway, congrats Harmony. I salute you--I can never keep interested in one story for a long ...
Apr 4, 2008 -
Re: best tip!!!*^*
This is the reason for YWS, no? Yes, it is a great tip. I can't tell you how much I've improved since joining. :D ~Azila~
Apr 1, 2008 -
Re: Cal's Fanmix & Proper Critique Central [Edited 10/23/10]
You're so organized, Cal! It's amazing that you can keep track of it all to well. :D *blows a kiss* ~Azila~
Mar 24, 2008 -
Re: Some basic tips
Gahks>> Very true, very true. Just to let everyone know: I posted an article about repetition (based on this one) in the Knowledge Base. ~Azila~
Feb 24, 2008 -
Re: Repetition
Repetition is one of my biggest pet peeves. It (in my opinion) is what determines a great flow from a good flow--and thus a great writer from a good writer. ...
Feb 24, 2008 -
Re: I have a problem.
I have the same problem. ALL THE TIME. I think maybe if you start with writing short stories, then gradually get longer and longer, that might work... maybe. I don't ...
Feb 24, 2008
