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Re: Buncha Random Photos
Hi there! Here I am, as requested. ^.^ I don't do much photography reviewage generally, but I'll do my best. :) Picture #1: Very nice! I love his expression. The ...
Dec 11, 2010 -
Re: Seyonne--The Warden
Wow. This is very, very nice. The shading, the shine of his skin, the wind in his hair, the storm clouds overhead ... all very well-done. The one suggestion I ...
Sep 2, 2008 -
Re: Self Portrait
Nice! The proportions are very nice, and you seem to have a lot of control. The only suggestion I have is that you make the dark parts darker, so that ...
Aug 26, 2008 -
Re: Ask a stupid question...
Because they eat their vegetables. Why does a vest have no sleeves?
May 23, 2008 -
Re: Need help with first story
So far, it seems like it could be interesting if the characters are interesting. I don't really know the characters (because I've only read this outline, and not the actual ...
May 23, 2008 -
Re: The Cat
This picture is soooo huge! @_@ Is there any way you can downsize it? Because I had to make my browser window as big as possible so it was filling ...
May 23, 2008 -
Re: Character Designs
Drawing #1>> Very nice! I don't like that the legs are cut off, but that's probably just your scanner. Also, it kind of looks like he's not wearing pants, which ...
May 15, 2008 -
Re: See all Evil
Wow. I agree that the second one is quite overwhelming. The bright-greenness of the eye (combined with its size) are startling. I think it could be sharpened a little, as ...
May 13, 2008 -
Re: Nature's paintbrush: Butterfly Photography!
Hey there! 1. I find the background a little distracting, but the foreground is really nice. Great capture of the butterfly's profile! 2. Again, the background is distracting. I also ...
May 13, 2008 -
Re: YWS Wallpaper!
Interesting! I like the blue haze and the bubbles. However, the upside down letters seem a little random. Maybe try making them a reflection? All you'd need to do is ...
May 13, 2008 -
Re: Want to blow fish?
Very cool. I love the composition and idea of it. I do agree that the fish in the upper right corner is really ... weird. I can't really tell how ...
May 9, 2008 -
Re: New Victoria Pictures
Hello! Picture #1>> Very cool! I like the "oh, really?" type of expression. Picture #2>> I like the contrast of the orange-ish background and her green eyes. but I would ...
Apr 11, 2008 -
Re: Music Maker :)
You're best friend, you say? :P Anyway, the picture is a bit blurry and the colors aren't vibrant enough. Maybe try making it darker and higher contrast? Also, I would ...
Apr 11, 2008 -
Re: Perfect Characters?
Good point, Suz! Sorry, I'll clarify: I guess what I mean by 'perfect' is that they are how YOU would like to be. So they would do what you would ...
Apr 10, 2008 -
Re: Perfect Characters?
I know perfect characters are considered "Mary-Sues" or clichés. And I know that we all try not to write about them. But don't you occasionally feel the urge to read ...
Apr 9, 2008
