Azila

Hi! Well, if you plan on getting something published, you'd better not post it on here. Personally, I wouldn't steal it and I don't know anyone n here who would, ...

Hellooooo! Welcome to YWS! I know you'll like it here and find everyone nice and friendly and all that stuff :D Personally, I haven't met anyone yet who hasn't been ...

My my my... I really don't understand why this hasn't gotten any comments! Actually, I do; I think it's a bit too long. Maybe try posting something a tad shorter ...

Hi! Are you new to YWS? I don't think I've seen you before... if so, Welcome! If not, then ignore me :D I'd recommend not doing the "Pre" for your ...

Hello! You already know me :D... sort of. Anyway, welcome :lol: PM me if you have questions (but I doubt you will...) ~Azila~

Hi! Welcome! I hope you like it here... what am I saying? I know you'll like it here! PM me if you have questions and I'll do my best to ...

Nice! This IS going to be interesting! I like that her character and a bit of her background are starting to show through. And the mega-sentences are much better too, ...

Ooh! Very nice! It works very well as a prologue/1st chapter. I like the descriptions and emotion. One fault I noticed was that you use incredibly long sentences. One or ...

Very original and exciting, Paw! However, there are quite a few little teeny tiny grammar/spelling mistakes which make it seem like you don't care about your writing even if you ...

I liked this, Paw! It is very intriguing! All the mistakes that I saw have been pointed out already (woe is me!) except for one: you need to space out ...

I really liked this. There were quite a few grammatical mistakes, but the plot was almost masterful. I will definitely not forget it in a pinch. I love stories that ...

Sorry, I haven't got any title ideas. I'm terrible with titles myself, so even if I did have an idea I'm not sure you'd want to use it :lol:

Alright, much better with the formatting firstly! And now, let's get onto my promised review, shall we? There are a lot of spelling mistakes (waist instead of waste, car's instead ...

There's something odd with the formating. If you change it, please tell me and I'll be glad to read it. But as it is, I found it headaching to look ...

Firstly, I don't think this is poetry. It is poetic, perhaps, but not poetry. Try to get a mod to move it to Other Fiction for you :wink: It is ...