Azila

I love those jack o' lanterns that are next to the forums :D ~Azila~

Hello! Nice to meet you! Is there anything you want us to call you besides aasics13189? That just takes a long time to type and I'm sure I'd never get ...

Hello everyone! Welcome to the wonderful world of YWS. It will pull you in and suck your life away. Before you know it you will be addicted! (It's true, but ...

WOW. I really liked this. I found the end a tad predictable though, like from the moment that he saw it was a mirror I knew that the intruder was ...

It was pretty good. I see what you're trying to do, but I think it needs a tad more work. Like Icaruss said, it is a bit choppy at times. ...

I love this. Like canis said, it gives you a great feeling inside when you read about Nightmare which is a really great achievement. Canis also pointed out most of ...

What parts are stiff? Here are the ones that poked out to me: Hey guys, when’s she gonna’ wake up?” A girl’s voice, maybe ten or eleven years old. “Hey ...

Hi there Gwennie! (Please excuse me for calling you that if you despise it XD) Alright, this piece is very powerful (and actually, I seem to notice a similar theme ...

Thanks so much everyone! I'm also 12 but my writing is nowhere near as good as yours. Don't say that, Ayra! Be confident! ...And besides, it makes me self-conscious. :lol: ...

Very nice! Honestly, I really don't see why nobody has critiqued this. The only main suggestion that I have (before I get on to the nit-picks) is that you don't ...

Yea, ditto Jasmine. Don't get discouraged!! If there's something you've written that hasn't gotten any critiques, PM me and I'll critique it! Just remember that I'm not that expirienced with ...

I suggest you not use "pre" It makes it a weird font that I have trouble reading. Of course, if you don't do "pre" then there won't be indents, so ...

The long summer day's slowly became shorter and cooler, the bright greens replaced by vibrant oranges a crimson crisp leaves. I would see children walking to school early on the ...

Hi canis! Man, I love this story! I'm so glad you're taking it out of hiding and dusting it off. There are a few minor errors that I noticed throughout... ...

She ran through the trees in the forest, as fast as her legs could carry her, holding a bundle in her arms. The woman could hear the hoof beats of ...