Azila

Hello! That's okay about not understanding what to do, I got to tell you: when I first joined, the Young Writers Society seemed like a huge winding labyrinth with way ...

There are no new ideas. Everything has been tried many many times. But the plot doesn't have to be terribly original in order for the style to be original. Rather ...

Let's face it: there are no new ideas. It's true. And come to think of it, I'm not the first one to say that :lol: which just proves my point. ...

[Okay, I wrote this before everyone left comments and I didn't rewrite it after coming back to it. Please excuse me if I'm saying things people have already said :roll:] ...

Akk! Icaruss beat me to it! Oh well, here's what I would have written... Very intriguing and well written. Really! I can't find much wrong with it except that you ...

Ahhh... I was thinking something along those lines. A way you might want to clarify that (if you get "unlazy" as you put it) is to start out with the ...

Welcome to The One and Only Young Writer's Society!!! It's a fabulous place. It's only down point is how insanely addictive it is. But I guess that's inevitable *sighs* Anyway, ...

Welcome, Kelsey! I hope you have a blast here. Please PM me if you feel like it! :lol: See you around! ~Azila~

This was really funny! Overall, I don't think it was my favorite piece of your work either, but it's pretty good. I don't have any big corrections --characters, description, settings, ...

Thank you everyone for reading and commenting on my work! Prokaryote-- Thank you so much for looking at it again! +1-- I do have a whole story behind the man, ...

Very interesting! It's a wonderful idea, but I think it could have been executed a tad better in places. It might just be me (very possible, mind), but I got ...

This is a very well written and touching little piece. I could only find a few things that could use changing... Row after row of uniform headstones, sit there watching, ...

Hello and welcome! I agree, rain is wet. What a philosophical name my dear! PM me if you want a critique, have a question, want to be friends of just ...

Hi Jas! PM me if you want a critique, have a question (which I will probably be able to answer :roll: ) or just want to chat or be friends. ...

Thank you so much Prokar! I will definitely fix the repetition stuff you mentioned when I get a chance (not now, unfortunately). And about nothing happening: I didn't want anything ...