Azila

i think i was tired when i posted it, and forgot to double-check. sorry. No problem. Thanks for clarifying. :wink: Hmmm... I've been seeing a lot of warewolf stories on ...

Hi Neemii! That's a really pretty name --is it your real name? If not, what does it mean?? I'm Azila (as you can tell) and I know exactly how you ...

Overall: I really enjoyed reading this and I think it has a lot of potential. However, it seems like it was written by a completely different person than the person ...

I found another Native American name that means wolf: Tala. In case you are interested. Of your choices, I like Wenona and Talulah --possibly Wenona a tad more than Talulah. ...

I really like the idea of this. But there isn't enough to give a real opinion, so please PM me when you post more... okay? Thanks, and happy writing!! ~Azila~

Any time! I really liked reading it. PM me when you post something else, ok? ~Azila~ P.S. The reason why the link in your signature isn't working is because there ...

Welcome Shapey! I'm sure you'll like it here. Everyone is helpful and friendly and if you encounter one person who isn't, don't be discouraged, they're probably jst having a bad ...

I have to admit... I didn't read this. :oops: It's just too long. Try posting one chapter at a time, then you will get more views and crits. Also, space ...

I really liked this. I liked the way you used the second line of the previous stanza to start the next one. A very interesting method that has a lot ...

I'm not a master in the area of Poetry either, but I think I can recognize talent when I see it. I love the way most of the stanzas flow ...

Well, Seraph pretty much said everything I would have said. Style: The writing style is a little too stiff and almost "text-book-ish" if you know what I mean. The readers ...

But anyways, Great work! I want to read more of this! Do read more of it, then! The first and second chapters are posted here in Other Fiction. ~Azila~ Part ...

This is really good, Cat! I love the way you show her inner warecat... and like bigbad said, the way you blend action and description gives a perfect picture while ...

Hi Jen! Welcome to YWS! I'm sure you're going to love it here-- anctually, you'll probably be hopelessly addicted before you know it. Anyway, I can't wait to read your ...

I love this. I do agree with Misty that you should suck the reader in more, though. Didn't you put this in the beginning of "Chap1"?? Anyway, keep up the ...