Azila

I'm back for more. ^_^ I'm not going to do nit-picks of this chapter, because there's nothing that popped out to me and I don't really have the time just ...

So, I'm back for number two. :} Again, I think I'll start off with some nit-picks, though there won't be many since this is mostly dialogue, and telling people to ...

Hi there Clockie! I know this is kind of old, but I wanted to read/review each chapter, so I'm starting with the beginning. :] This is fairly well-polished, so I'm ...

Hullo! I see you're new to the YWS, so here's a big welcome aboard. If you ever need anything, please let me know. :] First off, let me just say ...

Hi there Kagi! Here to Bamboozle you, as requested. First off, can I just give a little rant about non-story-related-text? Yes? Okay. I strongly dislike all that "I wrote this ...

Greetings . After a long and gruesome battle with writer's block, and over 20 hours straight of (somewhat futile) research, I've written a historical fiction , and (I hope) I'd ...

Okay, take-two. (WARNING: this review is being typed by an angry turtle on a train who doesn't like having her reviews deleted and doesn't like writing on trains.) I really ...

Revised. Monday, April 26, 1999 Dear Hannah, Your father sent me pictures of you from the Passover Seder, and I can not believe how much you have grown! You are ...

I'm guessing your word was probably jungle? Lovely description, by the way. Cold waves splash against my bare ankles. As each wave recedes, I can feel the sand being pulled ...

Hi there! First off, I'd like to say that I really enjoyed this piece. You did an excellent job of molding the two stories together. At first, it was a ...

Goodday, mister Ribbit. (Since he's the one who asked for the review, I figure I should address this to him.) As per request, I'm not going to do any nit-picky ...

Hi there, Bear! I'm not going to do any nit-picks of this, because I generally don't nit-pick dialogue (I don't want to interfere in the character's voice) and the way ...

animekaratepup because her reviews have improved incredibly in a short amount of time, and her enthusiasm is fantastic. And for being so sweet, we should save her for desert. Also ...

Good evening, sir. I just had my last exam, and you know what that means? It means I'm done with the semester! Which means I have time to review again ...

Ahoy there, Vi! I didn't forget about you after all. :} And since I took so dreadfully long to get this to you I'm going to try and be especially ...