Azila

Oh, and reading it over another time I noticed that you use hyphens a lot... Especially in the paragraph where you describe Patricia. And "coffee-shop" I don't even thing aught ...

Well, this is pretty good. I understand that it's just an exorcise for descriptions, so I won't hassle you about the fact that it's just description and nothing else. The ...

Whoa! Melikey! I love the personality of that strange woman in the end. At first, I really liked it (love the first paragraph, my dear!) then after a few paragraphs, ...

Thanks Kylan smorgishborg and kitty15! Kylan: I sis edit it so that (hopefully) the animals are less Disney-ish. borg: I was thinking along those lines: that the storm itself is ...

Yeah, I guess you're right about that... well you're a lot better than you were when you were 5 years old! (how's that?!) I agree that the second bunny is ...

These are really nice, canis! I haven't seen your drawings for such a long time, you've gotten really good! ~Azila~

This was pretty good. I think it would be cooler if you had a reoccurring theme (like she says something almost the same as she does). The rhyming was pretty ...

Well... it's good do be cautious, but we aren't that dangerous *covers fangs with an inconspicuous gesture* and we won't hurt you...out out of malice, anyway. I know how you ...

Hi there! Welcome to the YWS! It can be confusing at first but it's actually quite addictive once you get to familiar with the way it functions. What do you ...

Hi! Welcome to the one and only YWS! I'm sure you'll fit right in and enjoy yourself here. Please feel free to PM me (or anyone really... we're friendly folk) ...

Welcome! This is a truly amazing (and all too addictive) site. Like Flemzo said, just remember to read FAQs/rules and make reviews before posting work of your own and you'll ...

Umm... the reason it isn't working now is because the link is in quotes which aren't necessary. :wink: ~Azila~

I don't think titles are actually s very integral part of the story. I think that they are just there to give you a little foreshadowing of what's to come ...

Looking back on it now that I'm more coherent, I feel like we could use a LITTLE background. Just because you give her good clothes as an excuse for not ...

Wow wow wow wow wow wow WOW!! This is by FAR my favoritist thing you've ever written in the whole history of foreverness! My my my. This is amazing my ...