Azila

Hi Heather! How am I supposed to pronounce your name? It's confusing me. :? Anyhow, welcome to the YWS! (you should feel honored to have received a welcome from the ...

Hi Jack! Welcome to the YWS! What kind of things do you like to write? What kind of things do you like to read/review?? If you have questions about the ...

Hiya midnight! (can I call you that?) Welcome to the YWS! If it confuses you (which it's wont to do in the beginning... from my experience anyway) please PM me ...

Yeah, I'll PM someone who can move this to the Poetry Forums... It will be much happier there. ~Azila~

This is really good! I love the glimpse we got into this strange world. I am assuming, of course, that this is just a first chapter? There are a few ...

EDITED! Please let me know what you think. I tried to work a bit of smell and touch into it in that second big paragraph... hopefully it's somewhat improved. ~Azila~ ...

This is a writing competition for young writers or America between the grades of five and eight. Only six girls and six boys from the entire country are admitted, and ...

Darn you, Ayra! You caught all the good ones. :( BUT! I found a few nit-picks that escaped Ayra's combing: I was just thinking, Godzilla?! What the...?, when I caught ...

Can I ask what the buddy system is? IS it what all of these coloured names are? This , my dear, is the Buddy System. The colored names are for ...

Why don't they just give them the rice? The rest of the world shouldn't have to prove their vocabulary skills just so someone gets food. Well people have to visit ...

I think this is the third topic on this, but who cares. It is an amazing site so we should have multiple topics on it. Yeah, Via said the same ...

This is really good! I can see why you won, with a piece like this. :roll: I don't have anything constructive to say, so I feel bad... but good job! ...

I've gotten up to 5,442 (I think) but my brother's gotten up to over 10k. ~Azila~

These are very good, my dear! The imagery is beautiful... if a tad purple--but I'd be being hypocritical if I called your work purple prose. :D You include all four ...

This is pretty good! It's kind of a fable or folk-story kind of thing which makes me think that it would be happier in Other Fiction than Fantasy Fiction, but ...