Azila

This was a really touching, refreshing little piece of writing, I do declare! I love the way the story is told merely from the point of view of different characters ...

Hi Icequeen! are Storybooks. [/URL] What you can also do is just READ. Read the writings of other users on the YWS, or authors in the real world. Try to ...

Hi! Sorry I haven't reviewed this sooner. Well, I really liked this chapter... your story is getting really interesting! I might be stupid, but this seemed wrong... “No der. Specifically?” ...

Hi, mybigbluebox! Is there a nickname we can call you? :P Welcome to the site! I'm sure you'll be appreciated... just as long as people have seen/read the original of ...

Hi Nehad! That's really cool that you live in Egypt *conjures up postcard-like image of the Pyramids* Are you bilingual? I was considering studying Arabic this year... the writing system ...

Hi Ron! What language is your native language? Just curious... Welcome to the site! Please PM me if you have questions! ~Azila~

Thanks so much canis! The part with the metal gadget it important, actually (the gadget being a laser pointer) and the sudden mood change in the end is supposed to ...

Hi! Well, you've definitely come to the right place for constructive criticism! Some of the critics here are even a bit TOO constructive! Welcome to the site and please PM ...

Thanks, Fangala! Yeah, I've seen Whisper Of The Heart. I think I've seen all of Miyazaki's stuff actually... Wow! that's expensive for a stuffed animal! ~Azila~

Okay... Like I think I said, I'm entering this into a contest. Well I just looked at the website for the contest (The Blue Pencil from Walnut Hill, if anyone's ...

That's ok! I'm glad it can be read more than one way. :wink: And yes, I'm a Miyazaki fan... not all anime, just Miyazaki. :D Thanks for the review my ...

Oh, I'm sorry. Yes, still, frozen, is fine --my mistake, I was misunderstanding your meaning there. The contest was for exactly 100 words, none repeated... Mm... tough! Well, I think ...

This is pretty good! I hope the contest is fine with flash fiction, though, because it's really short --too short for me to write a proper review. But I will ...

This was pretty good. I kind of think it would have been better if you'd introduced the bird theme earlier because the first two stanzas seem completely unconnected with the ...

This is really good! I'm not an expert when it comes to poetry, so please excuse me if I tell you something that would ruin your whole poem... Okay. This ...