Azila

Mmm... I'm not sure what to say. I guess it's good--no, probably great--for what it is, but what it is just... isn't my cup of tea. Did that make any ...

My bubble of idle thought bursts as the electric school bell rings, sharp and metallic like an alarm clock. The rustle of papers and the squeak of metal chair legs ...

Thanks everyone! I actually won Jenna's contest (much to my surprise). Here's her beautiful watercolor of it. Thanks! ~Azila~

Thanks everyone! When (if :roll: ) I edit this, I'll definitely take your ideas into account! !Azila~

But! I've decided to make this really, really short Chapter longer by adding a part from the Alpha wolfs point of view. It will be the wolf watching Ayra's transformation ...

Hey, Arion and Arion! I'm sure both of you will have a lot of fun here and fit in and all that jazz. (which sucks because we all know that ...

Very nice Camille! Because it is so short, my only major comment is that you break up the huge paragraph... it wasn't very bad, but should be fixed anyway. I ...

Man, Camille! I'm so proud to have inspired this! The flow is beautiful... for any other piece I might have said you should make it a bit smoother, but I ...

I definitely agree with Heather; the sudden change isn't bad, but all I know about her before she changed is that she had mosquito bites! Play with it. With your ...

Thanks so much, Camille! Your reviews are amazingly helpful. I will definitely integrate your comments into the piece. ~Azila~

Camille, my dear, you are truly a miracle! That's so darn sweet of you, to go and review EVERYTHING in my portfolio! Don't worry, I'll be getting you back one ...

Thanks so much, Camille! Your critique was very helpful (as always) --brutal, but not mean. You should train some of these people on YWS. :roll: I will definitely be taking ...

Yes, I think our styles are similar... I guess our techniques are too. :wink: Oh, and this is random, but what contest? A YWS contest? Also random - I followed ...

Firstly, I'm anything BUT an expert when it comes to poetry, so please feel free to ignore my entire review if you so chose. Now, onto the review: I like ...

Thanks Camille (I didn't know that was your name!)! Your review was really helpful -- encouraging and scrutinizing at the same time. However, I think I have mentioned that I ...