Azila

Hey Jessie! Welcome to the forums! I see that you've been making a lot of reviews, so that's very good. PM me if you need anything! ~Azila~

I don't think this was posted in the right place... I'll get a Mod to move it. :wink: ~Azila~

Ooh, I really like the idea of this poem! I loved the line about the melted snowflake mixing with the tears... and the lines about the 'whimsical wind' --really effective. ...

But Azila's contest is for entries written from an animal's point of view...:? No it's not. It's an animal OR an inanimate object. :wink: Anyway, I like the piece! But ...

1. I intended to write about Gryphon being a traveler, a gypsie of sorts. But somehow it never came into the story. Maybe I should change that... 2. Aira's wings ...

Oh, thank you so much, Nate! You're a miracle! ~Azila~

I really liked this! The idea and plot are very original and refreshing. I think this should be moved to Fantasy Fiction, though... Overall I think you need to add ...

Hi there Nature Spirit! I'm Azila, nice to meet you! Feel free to PM me if you ever need anything--like a critique or if you have a question I'll be ...

Wow, that was hilarious! Not to mention really well written. I love the format where there's a short paragraph, then a line, then a short paragraph, then a line... and ...

Hi there Lexi! I'm one of those similarly home-schooled people Firestarter mentioned... and in fact one of the Moderators of our Usergroup. Nice to have you here on the site! ...

The second one is much better. The smaller head and slimmer neck really make it look more real. Very well done! The only thing I didn't like (that's in both ...

I'm having a little trouble with my Featured Works. My first two worked fine, but when I tried to make a third it didn't work. All that shows up is ...

This is really sweet and sad. It's not quite long enough to give a full critique, but that's okay--it's better than too long! I think that the way you started ...

Hi! Welcome to the YWS! I'm glad to see that you've been reviewing a lot! I actually am in the middle of critiquing something that you've written, so I'll go ...

Thanks so much, Camille! I don't know if I already said this, but I actually entered this piece into the Mark Twain Young Author's Workshop (see siggy) so encouragement is ...