Azila

How many times do I have to tell you to let me know when you post something new?! Anyway... I can remember now. I had opened my mask outside a ...

He sat me up on the wall by the pond with the ducks and frog's. "frog's" should be "frogs" I sniffled and blew my nose and hugged Daddy tight. He ...

This should be posted in the Welcome Forum! 17. Make sure to talk in internet-speak as much as possible. 18. Always post really long stories with no paragraph devision. Hehe... ...

This is beautiful! Really touching and emotional without being soppy or stupid or melodramatic. I think it might benefit from a little more description... not visual, necessarily, but other senses. ...

My name is pronounced Cam-EEL. :) Only me French teacher pronounces it Cam-IIIII! It's so annoying. >.< Oops, sorry. :oops: Maybe I should try for a job as a French ...

Hi Camille! I actually knew most of this from your other topic... or is this just an edit of the old one?? If not, why did you make a new ...

I think you're very pretty! I'm blonde too, but only one person's ever made fun of me for it... (a dance teacher, when I didn't remember the steps :oops: ) ...

*ehem* you were supposed to TELL me when you posted more!! Anyway... This is pretty good. I like the feel of this better than #2, but I'm not sure the ...

Hi there Ben! I'm Azila, and I'm 12 (though not for long, either). I'll check out some of your stuff... But like TN said, you should just go around the ...

Ooh! Phillip Pullman and Johnathan Stroud are two of MY favorite authors! I assume you've read the Bartimeus Trillogy, but have you read any of the other (less famous) books ...

Hey, Mara! That's a pretty name, Mara! Mara! Mara! Mara! :lol: I'll just keep on saying it forever, if you don;t mind. ^_^ What kind of dog is Diamond? That;s ...

Aww, this was sweet. I think the owner's reaction could have been a little more--dramatic. I don't know, but it felt to me that the owner took the death of ...

Hi Thunder! (

Well, for instance it shouldn't be "So how was he here?" It should be "So how is he here?" I think, anyway. :roll: I don't know, I might just have ...

I agree with Camille that this piece isn't as good as the first one. Though there aren't many spelling/grammatical errors, there's a lot of tense-changing. Also, The whole thing felt ...